So, I've got a first draft of the first two chapters: The Basics and Character Creation. You can get the pdf here at Scribd.com:
http://www.scribd.com/doc/85007357
It's rough. It needs a lot of editing and editions. And there's still the big descriptions of Hachigoku and the Disciplines to do. Kiho. Magic. Lots o'stuff. But there's a lot of good stuff here to dig into. Please do so! I want a lot of critique and questions and all that jazz. If there's anybody still reading this, anyway. I know I haven't been good about constant updates...
I'm still reading! Haven't been able to comment much/at all, because I've been very busy with uni work. Lots of awesome ideas coming out though.
ReplyDeleteUni work. Certainly understand.
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